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Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:34 pm
by RaithDuhal
Hey Guys! So I've been advised that this is a good place for yall to chat about my story! Hopefully you feel inclined to because that's my favorite part of writing! Thanks again for the great welcome ^_^

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Here's a link back to the story!

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:43 pm
by PalinSoulForge
Your story is insanely long, most of us read as people post each part. I will start reading it but can't promise to finish it quickly but will give my thoughts as I am reading through it.

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Posted: Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:45 pm
by RaithDuhal
Well I'd love to get people's opinions part-by-part anyway! That's the way it was meant to be read but since I finally finished it today I figured I'd just post the whole darn thing haha. Hopefully people don't feel bogged down by it...I'd like to think it's fast paced and doesn't ever get tedious!

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Posted: Tue Jul 13, 2010 3:07 pm
by Beorht
OK, a day late, but yeah, I'm taking a look now. Nice work, dude. You've got flair, great characterizations, and I'm not seeing cliche here.

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Posted: Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:43 pm
by RaithDuhal
Thanks a lot man =) That means a lot to me ^_^ Hopefully you enjoy it enough to read the whole thing! (not sure how much you've read yet....) But I'm very glad you got the chance to start =)