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by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:43 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Re: Nothing But Shadow

Really hope everybody thoroughly enjoyed the story! Please add any thoughts/opinions/ideas/comments on any part of it =)! Or just add your own two cents... Here's the link again to the discussion thread. Or heck, discuss it here! http://sw-e.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=9299&p=228434#p228434 Yes, f...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:40 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 7 (II)

Part VII A sharp ringing blow to his stomach doubled the prisoner over onto his knees. As he turned his head to look at his foe, he found a boot connecting heavily with his chin and sending him onto his back. Raith groaned painfully as he reached a blood stained hand up to check his jaw. Not broken,...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:40 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 7 (I)

PART VII Another bone-crushing blow sounded eerily from within the dank torture room. Buried beneath hundreds of feet of rock, the prisoner’s cries fell upon only the barren stone walls. The captive could only groan helplessly in pain as his cheekbone shattered beneath the unyielding force of the Ga...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:39 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 6

PART VI As the villainous crime lord anxiously paced across his office like a hungry Correlian Razor Cat, his mind reeled at the news he had received only moments before. Finally, he had them. Well, one of them. That didn’t bother him much though. Breaking prisoners was just one of the many skills i...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:38 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 5

Part V The squid-headed Quarren ran down the dark alleyway as fast as his legs would carry him. Pursuit was heavy on his heels and he knew without looking that if he hesitated, he would be dead before he hit the ground. His tentacles flailed in terror as he turned another corner and saw the reassuri...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:38 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 4

PART IV Raith sat in his father’s living room as he watched his new Jedi friend converse with his now-recovered parents. Try as he might not to, he found himself reflecting on his own parents. The mother he had never gotten to know. The spice-addicted father who had given his own son and daughter to...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:36 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 3

PART III The stars shone brightly in the night sky, softly throwing shadows across the trash-strewn street. Somewhere a cat hissed as a spice-head stumbled past. The miniature Womp Rats were a problem in this part of town, and only an excess of Correlian Swampbrow Cats could turn the tide. One such ...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:34 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Part 2

PART II Nirma and Julin Polist lived a humble life in their small urban home outside Ord Mantell’s primary starport. Their aspirations were few beyond their son being happy and having each other. They got by day to day, which was more than most on this despondent planet could say. It seemed that con...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:33 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Re: Nothing But Shadow

PART I It’s funny how slippery the ground seems when doom is at your heels. This was one of the many thoughts in the terrified mind of Reynald Juur as he hastily scurried down the next dark alleyway, staying just ahead of his heated pursuit. Sure, he had gambling problems, many people did; why did t...
by RaithDuhal
Wed Jul 21, 2010 11:33 am
Forum: Star Wars: The Stories
Topic: Nothing But Shadow
Replies: 9
Views: 6214

Nothing But Shadow

So here's my story...it's the first one I've ever done so don't be too harsh on me ;) Hopefully you guys can give me lots of input! Opinions on every little thing are great, but obviously the characters/story/conversations, etc. would be wonderful to get more insight on ^_^ I plan on doing more of t...
by RaithDuhal
Fri Jul 16, 2010 8:09 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Thanks a lot Insanity ^_^ So glad to hear you like it! I just started working on the sequel already, so loving the feedback/responses ^_^ Keep them coming please =) For any new SWE members to this thread who'd like to check out my story, here's the links again ^_^ Here's a link to the chat for the s...
by RaithDuhal
Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:46 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

I'm looking forward to perusing other people's stories this weekend ^_^! Perhaps my fellow SW loving nerds/dorks/lovers will have some ideas that can spark new ones for my sequel ;)
by RaithDuhal
Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:45 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Thanks Arch =) I just started writing the sequel to my first story ^_^ (Nothing But Shadow, posted in the TOR section...link is in one of the above posts) You guys got me all horny to write again haha
by RaithDuhal
Thu Jul 15, 2010 5:43 pm
Forum: Roleplaying OOC
Topic: Nothing But Shadow: OOC
Replies: 4
Views: 1937

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Thanks a lot man =) That means a lot to me ^_^ Hopefully you enjoy it enough to read the whole thing! (not sure how much you've read yet....) But I'm very glad you got the chance to start =)
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:45 pm
Forum: Roleplaying OOC
Topic: Nothing But Shadow: OOC
Replies: 4
Views: 1937

Re: Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Well I'd love to get people's opinions part-by-part anyway! That's the way it was meant to be read but since I finally finished it today I figured I'd just post the whole darn thing haha. Hopefully people don't feel bogged down by it...I'd like to think it's fast paced and doesn't ever get tedious!
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:37 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Yeah.....let's just say I started with small ambitions and it took on a life of its own =P Hopefully you like it though! I'd like to think it doesn't drag on... but I'd love to get everybody's opinions!
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:34 pm
Forum: Roleplaying OOC
Topic: Nothing But Shadow: OOC
Replies: 4
Views: 1937

Nothing But Shadow: OOC

Hey Guys! So I've been advised that this is a good place for yall to chat about my story! Hopefully you feel inclined to because that's my favorite part of writing! Thanks again for the great welcome ^_^ http://www.sw-e.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=9298&p=228428#p228428 Here's a link back to the s...
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:31 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Thanks a lot Beorht =) Just finished posting it all! So hopefully you guys like it ^_^

Here's a link to the chat for the story: http://sw-e.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=2 ... 34#p228434

Here's a link to the story!: viewtopic.php?f=24&t=9298&p=228410#p228410
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:20 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Haha, love it! Alright, in the process of sticking my story in the TOR section, chapter by chapter...soooo, who plans on reading it soon? =) I'm drooling for input, my favorite part of writing is discussing it with interested readers!
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:12 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Hey all to have so graciously welcomed me ^_^ That's neat that you did World of Darkness! I'm actually a huge fan of Exalted, I have basically every book they ever printed (another game by White Wolf) and looked into Scion too. Then I just got into post-apocalyptic with Darwin's World, which works o...
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:04 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Great! Thanks for the advice ^_^
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 9:00 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

Pleasure to meet you =) Well that's great! Always fun to catch up with people who got to experience the wonder that is/was SWG ^_^ And yeah they certainly are good for that...sometimes I wish I could actually play it though...my one friend who wants to play it is just always busy haha. Oh well =P Th...
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:56 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Re: Introduction

And just a quick question...is anybody here familiar with Wizard of the Coast's d20 Star Wars Roleplaying Game? Just curious because I have all the books myself ^_^
by RaithDuhal
Sat Jul 10, 2010 8:52 pm
Forum: General OOC
Topic: Introduction
Replies: 28
Views: 2063

Introduction

Hey guys and gals! Pleasure to meet you all ^_^ Just wanted to introduce myself a bit...been a Star Wars fan basically my whole life! Was a long time veteran of Star Wars Galaxies since launch, and am a gamer in general besides that. Just finished writing my first Star Wars fan fic, and that's what ...